Sunday, March 10, 2013

#8Sunday -- Drained - Episode 7: The Hand in the Ceiling

One more day of work and then a six day "vacation"! It's so needed - my body has begun the slow process of falling apart as though it were a cake being removed from the pan too soon after coming out of the oven. I figure that in another three or four days -- or maybe even at some point today -- certain essential parts (like my entire dominant arm from the shoulder down) will just say stick it, lady, and fall to the ground. Fingers crossed that this doesn't happen.

Background for this week's eight:

Our main male character - Michael - is showing his doctor what happened to him. It so happens that Michael was exsanguinated, and he's showing her all of this by taking over her mind.

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Michael did more of a visual scan while he had time. The men were leaning against the walls. The room was bare of furniture. A rat was in the corner, chewing on what appeared to be bloody rags.

He noticed the dark stains on the floor around his feet. They spread across the concrete. His eyes followed them all the way to the end of the trail and looked up.

Chains were bolted into the ceiling, and attached to them, a severed hand, fresh enough that blood was still dripping.

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Have a great day!

Keeley



8 comments:

  1. Ok eww but must keep reading to find out more! Excellent excerpt on the gory side!

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    1. Thanks Veronica :) I'm also curious to find out who that hand belongs to, although I'm kind of freaked that maybe I don't want to know?!

      Thanks for stopping by :)

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  2. Way to go on leaving me hanging like usual!!!!! Good choice

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    1. You are profoundly welcome, lol. Thanks :)

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  3. Wait a minute, Keeley. You're creeped out by my little crows, but have guys getting stabbed in the back, exsanguination, and bloody hands dripping from the ceiling?!

    Hypocrisy! (pointing and shaking my finger at you)

    Oh, and, ew!

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  4. Holy mind meld. I wouldn't want to be his doctor! Good job on the gruesome.

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